Thursday, 13 December 2012

Cry for the Moon by Marie Treanor

Cry for the Moon, a short Christmas story I wrote a couple of years ago, focuses in the beginning on a tragic element of many people's Christmas - loneliness. My heroine is so lonely after the loss of her husband two years ago, that she's spending Christmas alone in an isolated cottage, with a suicide plan.

Not festive!

However, since this is romance, unexpected hope comes to Ruth. And this does seem right for Christmas! So, thinking of the real life lonely this Christmas, and wishing them new hope and better things, here's an excerpt from Cry for the Moon...

Holiday Howlz: CRY FOR THE MOON
Available Now from Changeling Press

A lonely woman spends Christmas by herself in the country cottage she once shared with her beloved husband, a soldier who disappeared without trace two years ago. She has finally accepted that he's dead and is even contemplating suicide.

On Christmas Eve, a knock on the door heralds the arrival of a homeless man in ragged clothes who bears a staggering resemblance to her husband. However, he doesn't know who he is, or what has led him to the cottage. Recklessly, she lets him stay the night, but begins to suspect she may have made a terrible mistake when, in the midst of unexpected passion, a wolf flees howling from her bed.


Ruth lost herself in her dream, the remembered feel of his lips and tongue, the caress of his hand on her breast while the other sneaked up her skirt to stroke her thigh and hip and slide round between her legs. She was wet for him, always eager and the discovery made his breath hitch as he slid his fingers inside her panties to find the slick nub of her clitoris. Jared’s fingers… she loved his fingers, adored the pleasure they gave her. But soon, she wanted more. She turned in his arms, burrowing under his sweater to pull it over his head before unzipping his jeans and dragging out his fully erect cock. Raising herself in his arms, shivering as his hands closed around her naked hips, she gazed into his hot, devouring eyes as she lowered herself onto his cock. God, it felt so good, filling her, answering her every desperate need…

A loud knock shattered her dream. Whisky sloshed over her hand as she jumped. Who the hell could that be? Whoever it was, she hated them for interrupting her dream. It had almost felt real.

Standing, she dashed her hand across her wet face. Shit, when had she started to cry? As the knock came again, loud and impatient, she walked unsteadily to the door, wiping her eyes on her sleeve as she went.

She was a woman, alone, in an isolated cottage at night. But she ignored the danger. She’d been beyond caring for some time. In any case, it must be Jane or Charlie in the midst of some emergency.

She flung open the door, “What is it?”

And found a tall man leaning one arm across the door frame, staring at her. In the contrast of the lit cottage with the darkness outside, she couldn’t make him out properly, but he seemed to be large and ragged and unshaven. And by some unkind trick, he managed to look like her husband.

Her throat dried up. Shock and grief kept her frozen. Had she fallen asleep in front of the fire and was dreaming? After all, she’d had dreams like this before, where he came back… Only he hadn’t looked so… rough.

He moved, pushing his head forward into the light and she saw that of course it wasn’t Jared. This man had blank, wild eyes, not the thoughtful, intelligent, often cynically amused ones of her husband. And he was too thin, too unshaven. Jared had never had stubble growing all over his neck like that…

The man took a step nearer her, and instinctively, although she wasn’t frightened, she took one back. She blinked. In the glow of light from the cottage, his neck no longer looked so hairy, though he clearly hadn’t shaved for some time. Unsure, she lifted her gaze back to his.

He stared at her, a frown etched between his thick brows. Or were they really so thick? Perhaps they were just untidy. But his eyes… her mind was playing tricks, for his eyes seemed to be exactly the same shade of bright, piercing blue as Jared’s.

Incidentally, Cry for the Moon is also part of the Wolf Hunt series, and is available in this ebook collection, together with Urban Wolf, Forest Wolf and Galactic Wolf.

WOLF HUNT - E-book collection, by MARIE TREANOR - Available Now from Changeling Press:
Only sex can restore the damaged wolves. Will love destroy their vital mission, or save the world?

Commenters on all Changeling Press posts - including this one! - will be entered to win a past Changeling Christmas series! 



  1. Great Marie. You know I am a big fan. I just love your writing seems to flow so naturally.

    Does it? Or do you have to work those pages? :)

    in Germany

    1. Aw, thanks, Valerie :)

      USUALLY,it does flow pretty easily, but I still have to go over it because what comes out of my head doesn't always flow quite so well on paper :).

      Other places, the writing seems more difficult for whatever reason, and those bits do require more work, but it's worth it for me if I produce something readable by the end of the process :).


  2. Oh WOW!! This book sounds great!! Is the homeless man really her husband? I may have to read it to find out!!

    ehaney578 at aol dot com

    1. Go on, Elizabeth, you know you want to :).

      Thanks! Glad you like the excerpt!


  3. How nice!

  4. I enjoyed the excerpt.


  5. Ooh, awesome, Marie! I think I may have missed this one from your backlist--thanks for the fabulous excerpt!

    f dot chen at comcast dot net

  6. Welcome :). Glad you enjoyed it!