In my historical Christmas story, Lone Star Angel, I wrote of a heroine,
Carnelian Wendell, who just wanted to spend the holiday in a safe place. For
five years, she’d been estranged from her large family of five siblings,
parents and grandparents back in Houston. Her teenaged hasty decision to run
off with an adventurous man turned to tragedy when he was gunned down during a
stagecoach robbery. A visit to her sister who is a cook on a small west Texas
ranch seems timely, as well as a great place to hide out. Carni is as full of
life and activity as hero Luc Tarrant is quiet and set in his routine. Times
are tough although Luc would say his ranch is getting by. Carni needs to shake
off her bad experience and looks for ways to make a celebration. She turns the
household upside down by changing the menu, creating holiday decorations, and
bringing color into his life. Luc is helpless against her infectious spirit.
Excerpt:
“Whoa, Star, just a
little breeze. Nothing more.” Carni Wendell pulled the reins to the left,
wondering if she should have paid the stable master to drive her out to the
Bar-T Ranch. This time she promised herself she wouldn’t be a burden as a
visiting relation, so she’d hired the horse and cart for the month.
In the distance,
dark clouds chased the afternoon sun from the base of a craggy mountain. A
chilly wind blew across the west Texas hard-packed prairie, twisting a dirt
devil and tossing stray tumbleweeds across the path. Star stopped and nickered
as an apparition appeared on the horizon.
A dark horse with a
rider cantered in her direction and stopped not ten feet away, scraping up a
dust cloud.
“Take a wrong turn,
lady?”
The
broad-shouldered man’s voice was deep and full of suspicion.
“Easy, Star.” With
effort, she pulled the prancing horse back to an uneasy stand and turned her
attention to the stranger. His hat shaded his eyes, but couldn’t hide a strong
jaw covered with beard stubble and a tight mouth pulled down at the edges.
A loose tendril of
hair tickled her forehead. With a gloved hand, she tucked it under the knitted
scarf wrapped over her ears and neck to fight off the chilly air. “I’m looking
for the Bar-T Ranch. Would you know if I’m on the right lane? Can’t really call
this uneven, pot-holed path a road.” She paused, expecting the silent stranger
to answer.
Leather creaked at
his shift in position. He rested a forearm across the pommel and stared.
“The stable master
in Wayside Gap told me to turn south at the double fencepost. Not that I’m too
good with directions, but those were the only double posts I saw.”
“Thought I
recognized Einhardt’s mare.”
What? The man
commented on ownership of a horse, not about the boundaries for a cattle ranch?
She waited for his confirmation she was headed in the right direction. “So, I
did take the correct turn?”
“Could be.” The man
stood in the stirrups to peer over her shoulder. “What’s your business here?”
Carni’s gaze was
pulled to the muscles straining the thighs of his muddy denims. The man
obviously worked hard for a living. How dare a ranch hand question her?
Rudeness was not to be tolerated. Grasping the reins with one hand, she reached
under the cart seat to collect the velvet reticule lying at her feet. “I’m
tired and I’m cold. As wonderful as our conversation has been, I need to get to
the Bar-T ranch. I’ll pay you four bits to direct me to the ranch house.”
She dug out the
coins and held them suspended over the side of the cart, staring with a
narrowed gaze at the man’s shadowed face. When he sat as still as a statute
with only his eyes tracking her movements, her temper simmered. However,
discussing her personal business with a ranch hand was unthinkable. She shook
her hand and raised an eyebrow in his direction. “Okay, six bits.” Another coin
was added to her hand.
The wind teased her
skirts, flipping back the hem to reveal several inches of a red petticoat.
His gaze flicked to
the exposed lingerie and the right side of his mouth quirked for just a second.
She saw his
reaction and steamed even more. He’d taken advantage of the wind’s mischief
instead of averting his gaze like a gentleman would. “A dollar for the
directions. Take it now, I won’t be
offering more.” Money well spent to remove herself from the belligerent company
of this quiet man.
Several moments
passed before he clucked out of the side of his mouth and urged the horse
forward until abreast of the cart. “Whoa, Hades.” He held a cupped hand under
her outstretched one, looked up from under the brim of his black hat and
winked.
Heat flashed
through her at his bold gesture. With a quick movement, she released her hand
and let the clinking coins drop into his gloved hand. “Your boss will be
hearing about your surly attitude.”
He shrugged and
wheeled the horse, guiding it to the middle of the path. “Follow me.” Without a
look over his shoulder, he trotted up the small rise and disappeared over the
top.
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I do enjoy a good cowboy story!! This looks like a good one.
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I'd like to read more about these characters.
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Great excerpt and intro, Linda--thank you!
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